My entry for Susanna Hill's "The 1st Annual Valentiny Writing Contest"
Grumpy, Groany, Grouchy, Growl
by Kathleen Higgins 2016
"Go to your room Mikey."
"You don't love me!" Mikey grouched
"I love you but sometimes that's what mommies do
when they love you."
when they love you."
Mickey stomped
and stormed into his room and slipped
under the edge of his blue blankety world.
under the edge of his blue blankety world.
"Hello? Anyone home?"
"Mommy won't let me do what I want to do. Mommy doesn't
love me!" groaned Mikey
Daddy swooped under the blue blankety world.
"Love
is a funny thing." Daddy said, "My mommy wouldn't let me do
what I wanted to do.
Sometimes I sat in a corner for almost forever. "
what I wanted to do.
Sometimes I sat in a corner for almost forever. "
"Grandma didn't love you either!" griped Mikey
"She loved me but sometimes that's what people do
when they love you"
when they love you"
"I hear voices but I can't see anyone?"
"Popa slithered under the blue, blankety world."
"Once
my brother sat on my head," Popa said,
"he wouldn't let me do what I wanted to do "
"he wouldn't let me do what I wanted to do "
"That's really mean. He didn't love you." grumbled
Mikey.
"He
loved me but sometimes that's what people do
when they love you"
"Is your blanket talking, Mikey?"
"Go away, Mommy!" growled Mikey
"We
are discussing love"
"We are talking about doing things we shouldn't do."
Three cookies silently slid under Mikey's blue blankety
world.
Because sometimes that's what Mommies do
when they love you.
8 comments:
Kate,
I loved your setting of "a blue blanketty world" . It put Mikey in charge of his world. I liked the end of your story. Cookies always make a good ending.
Sue
This reminded me of my son when he is in trouble. =) Nice story.
I also enjoyed the "blue blankety world" and the sweet ending! Well done!
Been there, as a Mommy. I'm glad she delivered a peace offering into the glue blankety world. Cookies have ended many a war. ;)
Lol,
LOL, blue not glue
Aw! It can be hard being the mommy and the mikey in this story - I've been in both positions! Love your description of the "blue blankety world" - my little boy had one of those too where he'd escape when he was grumpy! And love that 3 generations of boys go under there to discuss love and that mommy slides in a cookie peace offering! Thanks so much for joining in the Valentiny fun, Kate!
Love your sweet ending!
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