However after I reread it, I liked my synopsis! I remember tossing the whole thing aside and saying it was drivel and it was a stupid story and no one would read it. Then I reread my first 15 pages of the manuscript and I realized I actually liked this story and I wanted to read more. Surprise, this WIP was OK! It wasn’t drivel after all. I liked my characters. I liked my plot. And the writing wasn't too bad for a 2nd draft.
So now I am re-energized by my own work. Now my work-in-progress is progressing. (what exactly is 'drivel' anyway?)
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Excerpt from "The Emerald Boots"
a middle-grade work in progress by K.A.Higgins ©2010
“Applause soared up like a mountain from the celebrating crowd on the other side of the woven wicker wall, closely followed by what sounded like a huge dragon belching from somewhere high above her. Jade curled up much tighter into the small storage corner she was hiding in.
Covering her ears and pressing her face firmly against her knees she tried to drown out the noise by chanting in her brain,
“This is a good idea
… this was a good idea…
… … this is not a good idea!”
A longer and much louder roaring vibrated the whole basket. The brain chanting abruptly adjusted to; “Eleven-year-olds don’t scream...
Eleven-year-olds don’t scream…”.
KaPoossh-SHHHHHHHHhhh – her whole wicker world tipped and swirled and completely knocked Jade loose.
“YES, THEY DO!!!” She screamed and scrambled out of her hiding place smack dab into a pair of solid, green tweed legs.
“Yes, they do what?” asked a Great And Powerful but familiar voice from above.”
©2010
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